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Lotus ❊ ([personal profile] keybroad) wrote in [community profile] the_newlydead_game 2017-05-15 09:46 am (UTC)

[Leans in and squints.] No. No, it's still lustrous. If it's not, blame the water pressure in our shower room we have to share.

I think that's a good feeling, then. Obviously I have strong opinions both of those two things are morally correct. I kept thinking, how do I make it not sound like a lost love song. Because some people will think almost anything is a lost love song. I thought the quickest solution was to have third person references to "he" as well as "she". Though maybe a handful of people have a girl and a boy that they love at the same time, for the most part I think it's a really quick way to evoke the idea that you care about multiple people in multiple ways.

Hmmmmmmmmm. Multiple heapmates. What rhymes with heap. There was this one band that had this whole song called something like that. Television Brain???

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